Sometimes meaning isn't everything.

You have a gorgeous mind. <3

i know the meaning all to well love i miss you and it's beautiful,..write more!!

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Always the flatterer and always the charming sweetheart. I shall try... just need a muse i suppose. Up for the job?

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"I'm never alone... I'm alone all the time" -Glycerine by Bush

"I drink away the part of the day that I cannot sleep away..." Modest Mouse

"You're nobody,until somebody loves you"
-Frank Sinatra

"Not all who wander are lost..."
- J.R.R. Tolkie

absolutely

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I was looking at other poems in your gallery, and all of them are very good. I can tell with this piece that you are trying to make the person seem as confused as you are, maybe even more so. But you need to make the poem a bit more uniformed (not that you should make it look like everything else, not that meaning of uniformed) in places because in certain parts, I can follow completely, and then, you leave me off at a cliff and I'm just looking down and thinking, "Okay...now what?"
The message you were giving was understood but only after i read it four times. Make your thoughts clearer while making them confusing. (I don't know if they made sense, but that's the only way I can put it)
So don't hate me. Just an opinion.

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---Everything here is eatable. I'm eatable, but that my children is called cannibalism and it is frowned upon in most societies." -- The wonderful, Willy Wonka

that*

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---Everything here is eatable. I'm eatable, but that my children is called cannibalism and it is frowned upon in most societies." -- The wonderful, Willy Wonka