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these loose ends they shift
tightening into the noose around my bones

it came on
like a storm
almost the shadow of a memory

leaving the taste of dust
the slivers of heat
beneath my rusted cage of rib

a taunting echo
the resonations
of the serene...
the spectral past

the ends tighten
noose loosens
bones shatter
scatter
break free
©2006-2009 ~Zellyn-Skyy
:iconzellyn-skyy:

Author's Comments

my mind is parched... confined... just an attempt to free it, refresh it... improvised, unrefined piece. Forgive it if it bores you... but someone inspired me to give this piece a chance to breathe...

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:iconshadokatt:
This is awesome. o _o <3
:iconzellyn-skyy:
:giggle: sank you =)

--
"I'm never alone... I'm alone all the time" -Glycerine by Bush

"I drink away the part of the day that I cannot sleep away..." Modest Mouse

"You're nobody,until somebody loves you"
-Frank Sinatra

"Not all who wander are lost..."
- J.R.R. Tolkie
:iconbrowneyedsprite:
Boooo my comment got deleted when you moved this out of scraps :P

I still love it after reading it a bunch of times. Makes me think of rain on a hot dry desert and then how everything grows because of it...and your desire to write will grow again, I know it :hug:

--
It is not our abilities that show what we truly are; it is our choices.
:iconlillith-sweetblood:
I like it...for lack of critique, its very good daniel :)
:icondiabolo-spinner:
oooh.. downloadable....
:icondiabolo-spinner:
you have to seriously write more :B

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